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Underwhelming

Underwhelming

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 3 years ago Updated 9 months ago 1 min read
I’m Glad That I Get The Chance To Express To You Guy’s A piece of me..

Imagine having to hold back overwhelming Tears inside…

Feeling like you have to be at war with your heart♥️

Because you can’t just

Take away or cancel your,

Love for someone

But knowing overall

It will subside;

Wise promises are often broken

Like a waiter kindly messing up a proclamation...

You make me feel better alone but the sad thing is...

I Feel Alone...

Between the isolated look in your eyes and the not-so-hidden lies,

There is a little island
Where I will lay,
And Then maybe you won’t see, The Overwhelming Tears in my face..

heartbreak

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock9 months ago

    A look inside your heart that's much appreciated. One question: On the second to last line, did you mean, "We're I will lay,"? If you intend "We're" instead of "Where", I have absolutely no idea what it means.

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