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U

the one that destroyed me

By Ramie LewisPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

U

arrived

the atmosphere changed

the world changed

everything changed when U walked through the door

the smile

the gate

the eyes

the EVERYTHING

U

I was fresh, innocent

I caught my breathe

I never considered myself to be in your league

U

you examined me

you hypnotized me

somehow

U transformed me

a love, a feeling, a comradery

very exclusive and private

Passion so private

I cannot drum up the proper feeling

I cannot express the vibe

I live with U

I miss U

You were my solar system

A planet out of orbit

A fiery asteroid destined to crash

Blinded by desire I lost my voice

Crumbled in your wake

Anticipated your arrival

U left us

U

broken and rebellious

beyond my control

I was consumed

U

U were never present

U were unhinged the moment you seduced me

heartbreak

About the Creator

Ramie Lewis

Science geek that tapped into my artsy, creative energy.

The magic and power of words define and create our world and brings me joy.

" Life isn't what you are given, it's what you create, what you conquer and what you aim to achieve".

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