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Time will Reveal

I'm completely different than before and this version I am Loving me more...

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 8 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - November 2023
Time will Reveal
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I lost you

A long time ago,

however, now you have returned to me...

I wish it stood a better moment,

For me to get caught up in a moment, with you.

Painstakingly, I spoke out Farewell to what was supposed to be eternal...πŸ₯ΉπŸ“β€οΈ

The strings on my soul have been clipped and now my heart operates unsystematically free...

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Comments (25)

  • Yusuf Alam5 months ago

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  • Julygwynet7 months ago

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  • Catherine Nyomenda7 months ago

    Amazing work Lonzo.

  • Grz Colm7 months ago

    Nice work on your top story Lonzo! 😁

  • Waseem Chem7 months ago

    Great work

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story!

  • Cathy holmes7 months ago

    Beautiful. I just love the ending. Congrats on the TS.

  • Real Poetic7 months ago

    Back to say congrats! πŸ’•

  • Donna Renee7 months ago

    You are such a soulful poet, every time.... love this one ❀❀❀

  • Melissa Ingoldsby7 months ago

    So truly relatable and painful πŸ˜– very well written friend!

  • Sugan Ya 7 months ago

    Nice piece...

  • Chloe Gilholy7 months ago

    This was lovely

  • The tragedy of poor timing.

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    Nothing like a fresh start with a new attitude. Nice one, Lonzo!

  • Mark Graham7 months ago

    Beautiful.

  • Real Poetic7 months ago

    Aww πŸ₯ΉπŸ©΅

  • "Now my heart operates unsystemically free" Whoaaaa, that line blew my mind! Loved your poem!

  • Mariann Carroll8 months ago

    You can tell by your poem that you are a passionate person. It’s hard to take it slow. The heart grow fonder when you take it slow. The ice cream taste better if you eat it slow.

  • Test8 months ago

    Very creative and powerful Handsomelouii. Well done!

  • Tiffany Gordon 8 months ago

    Very empowering!

  • Test8 months ago

    Absolutely fantastic poem. I Love that

  • Lamar Wiggins8 months ago

    Pretty deep, bro! Loved it!!!

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    beautifulπŸ’™

  • Babs Iverson8 months ago

    Lovely!!!πŸ’•β€οΈβ€οΈ

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