Time will Reveal
I'm completely different than before and this version I am Loving me more...
I lost you
A long time ago,
however, now you have returned to me...
I wish it stood a better moment,
For me to get caught up in a moment, with you.
Painstakingly, I spoke out Farewell to what was supposed to be eternal...π₯Ήπβ€οΈ
The strings on my soul have been clipped and now my heart operates unsystematically free...
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Amazing work Lonzo.
Nice work on your top story Lonzo! π
Great work
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Beautiful. I just love the ending. Congrats on the TS.
Back to say congrats! π
You are such a soulful poet, every time.... love this one β€β€β€
So truly relatable and painful π very well written friend!
Nice piece...
thats deep
This was lovely
The tragedy of poor timing.
Nothing like a fresh start with a new attitude. Nice one, Lonzo!
Beautiful.
Aww π₯Ήπ©΅
"Now my heart operates unsystemically free" Whoaaaa, that line blew my mind! Loved your poem!
You can tell by your poem that you are a passionate person. Itβs hard to take it slow. The heart grow fonder when you take it slow. The ice cream taste better if you eat it slow.
Very creative and powerful Handsomelouii. Well done!
Very empowering!
Absolutely fantastic poem. I Love that
Pretty deep, bro! Loved it!!!
beautifulπ
Lovely!!!πβ€οΈβ€οΈ