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They Could Live On

When We Propel Them To

By Thavien YliasterPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024
They Could Live On
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If You don't take the stories that You find

Residing within Your mind

And use ink on the page to let them lie

When Your time comes, Your stories will go with You

They'll never have had a chance to live and breathe

Like You will eventually, Your stories will die

Thavien's Token: Originally Commented on Donna Fox's (HKB's) "The Stories That I Tell."

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Comments (26)

  • Novel Allenabout a month ago

    That is why no matter how ticked off I get with Vocal, I still write my stories. They are for me more than anyone else. I have many not published because i never stop. Donna and i started from grassroots, before the TS flowers bloomed. So much truth in this poem.

  • Anna 2 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Very, very true, my friend. We have to get them out into the world! ❤️

  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    So true!!! Congratulations

  • L.C. Schäfer2 months ago

    Not me banging away at the keys frantically trying to get all the stories out!

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Powerful! CONGRATULATIONS Thavien!!

  • Gloria Penelope2 months ago

    WOW! Our stories need a chance to live and breathe. I like your poem. Congratulations on top story!

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Lovely and congratulations.

  • angela hepworth2 months ago

    Congrats on top story!!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    Oh yes Congratulations on TS also 🎊🎊

  • Andrea Corwin 2 months ago

    Yikes! The thought of that - what a motivation!!

  • Cheryl E Preston2 months ago

    Very introspective. I love when poetry is a top story.

  • This reads like a horror story to me. I've never gotten past wondering what untold stories there are in graveyards. Congrats on the Top Story! Great poem!

  • Nahhhh, not gonna congratulate you 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Loved it & congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Donna Fox (HKB)2 months ago

    hey hey hey!!!!! You got Top story!!! Congrats my friend!!!

  • Margaret Brennan2 months ago

    Exactly!! How I wish my grandmother wrote down her stories. She had so many, and now, like her, they are gone.

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Truly a deeper meaning behind this I love it 🥰

  • Matthew Fromm2 months ago

    Glad this made top story

  • KJ Aartila2 months ago

    Definitely the truth. Nicely penned. 😊

  • Paul Stewart2 months ago

    This is just perfect. So so true. I always feel that even if a story is never completely finished or you don't think it's perfect or whatever hang ups are stopping someone from publishing it...putting it out there...they need to just let it go our there...or else we'd never know what comes from it! Congrats on a beautifully written Top Story!

  • Rosie𐙚2 months ago

    Yessss, the stories are alll ours!!

  • Hehehehe so glad you decided to publish this! So true, when we die, our stories die with us

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    I feel perhaps stories are like fish eggs, few reach maturity.

  • Donna Fox (HKB)2 months ago

    I loved this in the comments section was just about to say you should publish it!! Glad you did!! 😊

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