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my heart beats, raw and bruised as you slam
that damn door in my face, more pain
added to the chasm yawning
between us. my arms are
no longer your safe
haven, haven't
been for months–
the slow
fade
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Thank you for reading :) Nothing like feeling as though your teen children are 'breaking up' with you.
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Comments (14)
It's not any easier when they're adults with kids of their own. Just sayin'. Another awesomely powerful piece, lil sis!
Oh no, which one of your children are doing this to you? *cracks knuckles* I'll teach them a lesson!
This is heartbreakingly evocative but such a captivating read
Love your use of words in this poem and the "fade" at the end!
Really hits hard. I loved the first lines.
I have never tried a nonet but now I should. Well done!
Incredible poem.
I like your take on the "relationship" aspect. Romantic breakups are overdone in my opinion. Good luck with the challenge!
Ouch! Raw indeed! Great nonet, Heather!
This one resonated with me despite not having kids - I guess the feeling of losing someone translates to any kind of relationship. You did a fantastic job here!
Oh my. That was wonderful, yet sad. But they're teens. They'll always love you. 🤗
Wow. I feel this.
Oh, the feels with this one 🥺❤️ You have such a strong voice, my friend! The burnout at the end was so poignant and visual ❤️
aww, pally. this punched my gut a little. Love the use of damn (obviously) Lovely work. Findamndin.