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The Rose

A simple observation

By Heidi McCloskeyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Rose
Photo by Allec Gomes on Unsplash

A perfect rose standing alone.

Its aroma so delicate and sweet.

Opening the senses, alluding the mind

The illusion of its beauty so real.

Soft to the touch, the petals bend

Allowing a deeper look inside.

Yet, approach it gently, don’t let it fall

From its glorious state of grace.

A sturdy stem upon which it stands.

Protected by its hard-earned thorns.

Requiring both the waters of life

And the fire of the sun to grow.

It is nothing and everything on its own.

Blossoming so wondrously before the eye

It is strong, yet also so weak.

Savor it in the memory, it will never die.

There it will remain still alluding the mind.

But to this rose,

Take what you may to grow.

Be fuller than the air of what you are.

And I will continue to enjoy the riches

Of your perfection in this stance.

Oh, beautiful wonderous rose.

nature poetry

About the Creator

Heidi McCloskey

I have internally decided that I am a writer. Since that decision was made, the voice in my head has changed. It’s become louder as it begs to be released.

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