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The picture of our lives

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By The Invisible WriterPublished 3 years ago Updated about a year ago 2 min read

The sun rose over the mountains

As I painted the picture of our lives

The man in the moon watched me cry

As I painted the picture of our lives

The clouds stretched, lazily across the sky

As I painted the picture of our lives

I laughed, until I cried, until I smiled

until I cried again

As I painted the picture of our lives

~

The birds sang a beautiful song

The flowers blossomed in summer air

Every stroke of my brush, told a story

Every detail, brought to a life a memory

In brilliant color of a moment we shared

~

I painted the picture of our lives

In mornings that turned into afternoons

In dreams that came from the center of my heart

In spaces where our love was my only home

~

I painted the picture of our lives

In days that fell one after another after you were gone

In nights where I couldn't remember who I was

Because without you, my love

I feel so far away from where I am supposed to be

~

Every day I wake up to paint a life with you

Every day a different scene

From a place we shared, From a love

Where I cherished every beat of our hearts

Where every glance I stole was a treasure

Where every time you didn't think I was looking

I couldn't take my eyes off of you

~

Every time I paint the picture of our lives

I relive the sunlight in your hair

The twinkle in your eye, the glow in your smile

With each signature I place in the corners of our lives

I look up at the blue sky floating above and shout

At the heavens where you escaped

How long will I have to wait

Before I can leave this place

And be with the one I love, again

~

In the daylight of this afternoon's passing

Rain is falling from a darkened heavy sky

Interrupting a day we spent together

On a quiet beach in the Outer Banks

Raindrops wash unnoticed over my face

My clothes cling wet to my skin

almost without my knowledge

I stand transfixed under the falling storm

My eyes watching paint run away from us

In tiny rivers of color

Flowing from the canvas of our lives

To a muddy ground below, each drop of color

Landing with a splash, as I stand thinking

I will never

Stop loving you.

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The Invisible Writer

"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"

Charles Bukowski

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Comments (4)

  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)about a year ago

    The moments you thought that I wasn't looking❤️I couldn't take my eyes off of you-😉📝💯✨Lovely Piece❗

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Such a beautiful love poem. The picture is a perfect match for these words "As I painted the picture of our lives." Well done ❤️

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Hi Eye ~ This one brought back so many memories ~ Thank you for that ~ The dichotomy among the present day old/new has always been an enigma to me as a Senior: "Respect their Elders" They 'might' be one someday, too? Please repost this for all of the Newbie 'Creators' - I have just done so with one of mine - Share with them that 'No-Work' retirement is not what it's all cracked up to me - regardless of how much money we've snuggled away - it can be very lonely. They may be surprised how things really were within our Gen without the Guns and Shout-Downs or the smoking "Donuts" fear to simply walk across a street. Sorry to Blab, Thank You For this Touching-Tale, Invisible. Jay

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    This is a beautiful poem, who would think this painting inspire such a creation . Normally the poem would inspire a painting. 😊🎉💃🏽

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