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For my father

By Barb DukemanPublished 7 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in the Smooth Challenge

With bold, unwavering strokes

Of tinted shades, carefully mixed,

Covering top to bottom

Smooth paint on rough walls

A hobby, a profession, our father –

He painted our lives.

Old brushes, lovingly wrapped in paper

Each brush with a purpose

Fine, broad, stain, finishing

Each imprinting its own design

A swirl, a sparkle, a careful touch-up

Each marked with every color ever used –

He painted our lives.

He protected the ground

Our foundation, our past

Canvases wide, speckled with splashes of color,

Spread over valued items of daily life,

Keeping the workspace clean

Prepping saving valuable time –

He painted our lives.

The finished result: three rooms,

Two blue, one pink –

Glossy, seamless, flowing;

Beautiful, detailed, unique

Pleasant places, spectacular color

Inviting showrooms for the world

This he was most proud of –

He painted our lives.

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About the Creator

Barb Dukeman

An English teacher by trade, I’ve spent 32+ years in the classroom, instilling a love of literature (and a tolerance of writing) in my students. I started reading at the age of three and started writing at 13 with a poem about green socks.

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Comments (6)

  • Alison McBain6 months ago

    What an emotional and moving tribute to your father. Very engrossing.

  • Denise Larkin6 months ago

    Beautifully written. Congrats.

  • D.K. Shepard6 months ago

    A lovely poem! Congrats!

  • Real Poetic7 months ago

    Beautiful! 🩵

  • Gosh this made me so emotional. A very wonderful poem!

  • Dana Crandell7 months ago

    A touching tribute, well penned.

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