The floor is Lava
My kids favorite game
The floor is lava
molten flames, rivers of steam
stay safe, feet off ground
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"Poetry is what happens when nothing else can"
Charles Bukowski
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Most people talk about things that bother them as a way to vent their emotions, another way is through writing. As I sit writing in my car, I ponder how much writing, in itself, has helped me become the person I am today. I have endless amounts of pages filled with poems, stories, and sometimes random blurbs. Writing is a window into your soul. The simple action of writing has benefited me; by helping me to achieve a better memory, helping me to learn and grow intellectually, and helping me to communicate my emotions.
By Sarah Wilcox7 days ago in Journal
Comments (5)
I think there are juvenile single celled creatures in primordial soup on planets billions of miles away who play this game 😁 that's how universal it is!
I've always loved this game, it's a game I play with my students at school often!! But I do it to this song: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wbNAiN8FTfc
Love the image and the words and you now have a new subscriber
This was fantastic! I loved it! 💖
I like it... Great job ⭐⭐⭐