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Tell Me I'm Wrong

Words I want to say

By Luke FosterPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Tell Me I'm Wrong
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The love I feel for you,

Is beyond compare.

I love you so much,

That I can’t help but stare.

I love your sparkling eyes,

And your long red hair.

But the way I feel now,

It’s just not fair.

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You know that right now,

I’m feeling so low.

You are my strength,

I’ve already told you so.

So why does it feel,

That you’re about to go?

And I’ll be left where I was,

Some time ago.

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You must know these things,

Look so very wrong.

Between you and him,

Tell me what’s going on?

No relationship,

Is ever like a song.

But recently,

You’ve been emotionally gone.

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Inappropriate things,

Going on out of sight?

Does somebody else,

Get the warmth of your light?

Because the way that I’m feeling,

Means I can’t sleep at night.

So, please, tell me I’m wrong,

Or tell me I’m right.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Luke Foster

Father. New husband. Wannabe writer.

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Comments (8)

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Wonderful poem full of sentiment! I felt your heart in this. Heartbreaking yet very well penned!

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    So very sad 😔

  • Ashley Limaabout a year ago

    many hugs to you

  • Gary Ragnarssonabout a year ago

    I felt this deeply

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    You captured the rawness of being stuck in the middle beautifully.

  • 😉✌️💯You are Right❗

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Describes that feeling of knowing what you don't want to know perfectly ❤️

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Ohhhh, heartbreaking!!!💖💖💕

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