Look up to the sky alight -
Starry night!
Darkness never ending, ebon pierced by twinkling bright!
How they sparkle, sparkle, sparkle,
Ever shifting out of view!
While the night becomes eternal
Through dark and loathsome miracle,
The lost sun cannot renew;
Stars are blind, blind, blind,
To the horrors that we find,
Their silent scintillation cloaks a forgotten world affright
With the night, night, night, night
Night, night, night
Oh, a world adrift forever in its blight.
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Stanza I of Poe's "The Bells" for comparison (thank you, public domain):
I.
Hear the sledges with the bells—
Silver bells!
What a world of merriment their melody foretells!
How they tinkle, tinkle, tinkle,
In the icy air of night!
While the stars that oversprinkle
All the heavens, seem to twinkle
With a crystalline delight;
Keeping time, time, time,
In a sort of Runic rhyme,
To the tintinabulation that so musically wells
From the bells, bells, bells, bells,
Bells, bells, bells—
From the jingling and the tinkling of the bells.
About the Creator
Catsidhe
Pronounced Cat-she: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Cat-s%C3%ACth
What can I say about myself?
A mystery wrapped in an enigma wrapped in a walking coffin
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Comments (3)
Interestingly, as I finished reading your microfiction piece, "Today is a New Day", your powerful final line made me think of Vincent Van Gogh (and I was even listening to "Vincent" by Don McLean as I read this poem). Spooky! This truly could have been written by Poe himself. Brilliant!
Night, night. It's time for me to go to bed, We have Easter sunrise service tomorrow morning. Evocatively poemed.
Deep thoughts aptly shine in your poem. Shine on starry sky! 🩷