Spacetime
Abecedarian poem about spacetime
Aloof
Backstabbing and disappearing. Poof!
Congealing around existence
Demise-rearing movement is persistent
Everlasting and ever looming insistence
For resolution
Godly powers providing us with pittance
Humdrum living until deliverance
Infinite loops with consistence
Jostling intent with coincidence
Knocking down perseverance
Longing for chaos and immanence
Majesty shrouding the universe
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Nonconforming
Obliging and welcoming
Potential shifts are foretelling
Quakes, quasars and quickening
Rate of expansion is deafening
Stripes of it bear lightening
Treading through and siphoning
Unearthing secrets so stifling
Voluminous and frightening
Writhe with the unknown, co-piloting
Xeric, expansive and maddening
Yet majestic and mind-boggling
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Zebrine coexistence life coddling
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Mohammed Darasi
I write fiction, poetry and occasional articles about interesting topics. I recently created a website (just because) which I will be posting my writing in (among other things). it would be great if you check it out. https://mindpit.co.uk/
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His Haibun
He does not like poetry; I write it anyway and do not tell him. It's true his face is not a poet's face. It is round and open, youthful; too apt to be compared to the sun. His nose is neat. It is impossible to imagine him smoking a cigarette, terse, full of cheekbones and tension. His warmth burns my fingertips. I am here for his fascinating body, the haphazard freckles I touch one by one; he is here for my eyes, just my eyes. A sunbeam sneaks through the curtains and pierces us both, sizzling the spices of his skin. I inhale and wrap myself in him. He kisses my eyes.
By TheSpinstress6 days ago in Poets
Comments (21)
Beautiful poetry!🥰
this was great!
This felt momentous, as if each line contributed to a crescendo until the speaker resolves that space, which they've been describing for twenty-five lines, is, in the end, boggling to the human mind. Brilliant approach.
Nice Share! Thank you, Author
This is so beautiful and well done. I loved, "Everlasting and ever looming insistence" - gorgeous!
Bravo! Your hard work is paying off—keep it up, congratulations!
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
CoZmic. Nice.
I like the word Zebrine! Nice take on the challenge 👏 ❤️
Space-time is a great subject for a poem and you tackled it so well. Congratulations on your TS and good luck with the challenge
Hi can you please help me actually I write a poem but I don't know how to upload on vocal can you please tell me and in my poem I 125 words so it is eligible or not
Hey there. Congrats on the TS.
I am loving the lines people come up with for X and Z! This is wonderful, good luck in the challenge 👍
Mohammed! This is next level, my friend! I love every line and the symbolism weaved in! Congrats on a very well deserved top story and a phenomenal entry to the challenge!
Very deep , great entry
Wow! This is fantastic. There's a lot of symbolism and depth. Great job, Mohammed
Great job. The entry is very rhythmic with beautiful imagery.
Beautiful entry -loved the contradictory depiction of space with all its mysteries. Perfectly captured 🤍
Oooo, I learned two new words today; zebrine and quasar! Loved your Abecedarian!
Great entry. Well done.
Great subject and a great job of conveying its mystery in this format, Mohammed! Looks to me like a Top Story and a real contender for the challenge!