Earth, sun and moon align and the experience excels my expectations.
Celestial trancendense engulfs me.
Loss expected by you about my blindness is misaligned and devoid of insight.
I am sightless, yet do not underestimate me.
Perceptions of your own constructs of the five senses do not apply to me.
Some may assume this overshadows and diminishes my rapture.
Enhanced and unique; my sensory pathways outshine.
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My mental health? Bipolar 1 (Rapid Cycling), Complex PTSD and Functional Neurological Disorder.
My son’s gentle wisdom furnishes me with the gift of hope.
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[ Before reading my variation on the expected format for this Challenge. ‘An acrostic is a poem or other word composition in which the first letter (or syllable, or word) of each new line (or paragraph, or other recurring feature in the text) spells out a word, message or the alphabet.’
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The wonders of the universe will always leave us in awe and leave us marveling at the maker of our magical world. We so need to cherish mother earth. Beautiful awe inspiring words.
Brilliantly expressed and love it!!!❤️❤️💕
Beautiful and indeed inspirational!
👏 “do not underestimate me”! Love that. 😊
Nice entry
Gosh this was magnificent! Loved your Acrostic!