linen, rough walls
broken windows
jammed lids
blazed fixtures
.
akine she
almost shattered
no shoulder to rest upon
no grief sharer
.
scar on the walls
or say
scar on her heart
homogeneous!
.
Yelped!
Oh lord!
How does it feel?
being heartless?
dispatching cold sarcasm?
.
How shameful
overflowing greedy with greed
sweeping entire world of kind
.
this toxic relationship
this throbbing feelings
Why not terminate everything?
liberate everyone?
unshackled unshackled
.
About the Creator
Riju Chaulagai
I am in my early 20s and I have been writing poems for a couple of years now.
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Comments (1)
Compelling stanzas and message. A few rough edges, but it's very beautiful.