there's a parking lot
in the middle of nowhere
that holds the memory of magic
well, our magic
and by the universe standards
the two of us
looking for shooting stars
beneath the clouds
knowing that we at least saw one
it was magic
we've never been a cliche
but tonight
under that universe
under that magic
we became one
because surprise love
and surprise life
brought us here
to the shaky ladder
of an unexpected future
held together
by the comfort of your hand in mine
i swear there's fire in the sky
and it is for us this time
two lives that could have ended
now dancing beneath the stars
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