Poets logo

Over You

Ask Me in December, Babs' Unofficial Challenge

By TheSpinstressPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Over You
Photo by Natasa Mirkovic on Unsplash

Ask me in December

if I'm over you;

ask me in December

if I forgot the things you do.

November will be early, love -

By then it won't be true.

In November I anticipate

being nearly over you.

October will bring distraction

an unwelcome autumn flu;

Halloween will make me smile

but at night I'll think of you.

September will come offer me

a little lingering sun; your

smile will haunt me still,

but I'll take its light in lieu.

August is a no-hoper;

I'll remember everything gone through.

My hand will still feel empty;

I won't be close to over you.

In my favourite month, July,

my favourite man will still be you

and if I still cry on thinking, well -

there are some tears still due.

June will give me nothing,

except bitterness and rue -

I will want you, darling,

but I'll hate the things you do.

May will pass like April has

in sobs and rain and blue.

If I had to guess, I'd say -

In December, I'll be over you.

By Susan Flynn on Unsplash

This poem was written for Babs Iverson's unofficial challenge. Thank you Babs, this was an amazing prompt! Find out about it here: https://vocal.media/writers/ask-me-in-december

heartbreaklove poems

About the Creator

TheSpinstress

New bio in progress :)

Enjoyed the story?
Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.

Subscribe For FreePledge Your Support

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insight

  1. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

Add your insights

Comments (10)

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Fabulous work!!!!

  • L.C. Schäfer2 months ago

    This brought some stuff back for me.... Days and years so long and unbearable and empty. But December always rolls round eventually!

  • Kodah2 months ago

    Beautifully written! Love your entry for the challenge! 💌

  • Murali2 months ago

    This is a great poem. You've used months in a creative way with metaphors.

  • Gloria Penelope2 months ago

    Sometimes it's good to be over someone. Nice and relatable poem. I loved it.

  • This was so emotional and relatable as well. Loved your take on this challenge!

  • D.K. Shepard2 months ago

    Really liked how this contained month by month snapshots of emotional processing of heartbreak! Great closing lines!

  • angela hepworth2 months ago

    Beautiful & well written!!

  • Shirley Belk2 months ago

    Nice take on this challenge

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Brilliantly & beautifully written!!@ Loving it!!!💕❤️❤️

TheSpinstressWritten by TheSpinstress

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.