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For Breakup Nonet Challenge

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a month ago 1 min read
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Years of joy, love, pain, down to regret

Perhaps I took her for granted

Should have brought her flowers more

Stopped all the complaining

Showed her how I feel

Been there for her

Not just me

Too late

Gone

heartbreak

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald is a 911 dispatcher of 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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Comments (7)

  • Grz Colm21 days ago

    “Not just me” - powerful words spoken. 👍

  • Gina C.about a month ago

    Aw, it's so hard to look back sometimes. Emotional and honest work here - excellent! <3

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Really a heartfelt poem.

  • Christina Bargerabout a month ago

    I can relate to your poem. It was beautiful content.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    That is so sad. Beautiful piece.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    This was so poignant and emotional. Loved your Nonet!

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    Ouch...felt this one to my core, Andrew! Great job. Often hardest to look back and realise the mistakes we have made and how we could have repaired things.

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