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Our Father Sees

So we look up again

By Rowan Finley Published 2 months ago 1 min read

We know you see us, Father in Heaven,

just like you discipled the remaining eleven.

The Holy Spirit fell down like fire,

you fulfilled hope and burning desire.

You drove them to acts of overflow,

to get the world’s attention and, love, show.

You gave us the baton to race on;

you strengthen us, so weakness is gone.

We run to you on white sandy beaches,

on stages in our hearts, the Holy Spirit preaches.

We are to plead with all who are in need,

to receive the gospel, so that they can be freed.

inspirational

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. Aspiring licensed mental health counselor. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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Comments (2)

  • Archery Owl2 months ago

    Perfect timing with this one since Pentecost is right around the corner

  • Colleen Walters2 months ago

    He works in amazing ways. Let it be so amen. 😊 great work

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