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i stand at the edge of the valley
the place i kissed you first that night
tumble in the red shadows
fire lit and without guilt
but the guilt then came
no more of us
saddened now
my fault
mine
About the Creator
Kevin Rolly
Artist working in Los Angeles who creates images from photos, oil paint and gunpowder.
He is writing a novel about the suicide of his brother.
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Comments (6)
I'm imagining a fire or an accident, but that may be because I just read your other piece. Either way, this is very good. I feel there's a story in there somewhere, even if I don't know what it is. The artwork is also great.
This packed quite a punch! One of the few that I’ve read from the responsible party in a break up dynamic. Well done!
This was so poignant and relatable! Loved your Nonet!
Oh, sometimes we feel like it.
Sad. I liked the finality of the last line and the way you led to it.
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