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New Rule

A Break-Up Nonet

By TheSpinstressPublished about a month ago β€’ 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
New Rule
Photo by Greta Pichetti on Unsplash

Do not touch me ever again. No.

Not once in either of our lives.

Do not wrap my hands in yours.

Even if I am dead -

do not come to kiss

my cold forehead.

Do not

touch.

By Crawford Jolly on Unsplash

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Here is another negative nonet, if you're into that kind of thing: Some things are easier than others

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Comments (17)

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Congrats on TS!πŸ₯³ I loved this, great entry!

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a month ago

    I guess they're not getting back together, then. So final, so powerful.

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is great! Congrats on the TS.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    I don't know how I miss this! I freaking loved it! Congratulations on your Top Story! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Gene Lassabout a month ago

    Short and powerful. Very well done.

  • angela hepworthabout a month ago

    So powerful.

  • Zivah Avrahamabout a month ago

    Those last three words. What a message. Brilliant.

  • Gerald Holmesabout a month ago

    Excellent shot at the challenge. Loved it. Congrats on the Top Story.

  • ROCK about a month ago

    Your point was made quite clearly and well scribed, I am sure whoever it is won't dare!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    Sad 😒 but very good

  • Marti Maleyabout a month ago

    Sad but also quite beautiful. I love the strength, as well as the pain. Lovely work <3

  • Darkosabout a month ago

    Very strong and powerful in saying No! Great Nonet :)

  • L.C. SchΓ€ferabout a month ago

    Loving that imagery! Well done, good luck in the challenge

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Lovely, felt it.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    So emphatic! Could feel the disdain dripping from this one! Excellent entry, Spinstress!

  • Lana V Lynxabout a month ago

    Cannot be more decisive and clear: Do not touch! Great nonet.

  • Rachel Deemingabout a month ago

    Keep your distance! Excellent.

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