New Rule
A Break-Up Nonet
Photo by Greta Pichetti on Unsplash
Do not touch me ever again. No.
Not once in either of our lives.
Do not wrap my hands in yours.
Even if I am dead -
do not come to kiss
my cold forehead.
Do not
touch.
I hope you liked this poem. Please let me know what you thought in the comments!
Here is another negative nonet, if you're into that kind of thing: Some things are easier than others
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Comments (17)
Congrats on TS!π₯³ I loved this, great entry!
I guess they're not getting back together, then. So final, so powerful.
This is great! Congrats on the TS.
I don't know how I miss this! I freaking loved it! Congratulations on your Top Story! ππππππ
Short and powerful. Very well done.
So powerful.
Those last three words. What a message. Brilliant.
Excellent shot at the challenge. Loved it. Congrats on the Top Story.
Your point was made quite clearly and well scribed, I am sure whoever it is won't dare!
Sad π’ but very good
Sad but also quite beautiful. I love the strength, as well as the pain. Lovely work <3
Very strong and powerful in saying No! Great Nonet :)
Loving that imagery! Well done, good luck in the challenge
Lovely, felt it.
So emphatic! Could feel the disdain dripping from this one! Excellent entry, Spinstress!
Cannot be more decisive and clear: Do not touch! Great nonet.
Keep your distance! Excellent.