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Narcissist

An acrostic

By E.K. DanielsPublished 2 months ago 1 min read
Narcissist
Photo by Sander Sammy on Unsplash

Ego, the Big Bang, fills space, kills time, subdues the atmosphere

Casts long shadows where stars once shined.

Luminosity of speckled stardust dimmed, unnoticed in the glow of the self-absorbed orbit.

Invisible becomes the worth of others, as they bask in the center, a sun in their own universe.

Pulling all the oxygen out of a room, as if by force. The gravity!

Silently, victim’s esteem erodes in the penumbra,

Each careful calculation meant to cast a shadow of doubt.

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E.K. Daniels

Writer, watercolorist, and regular at the restaurant at the end of the universe. Twitter @inkladen

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Comments (6)

  • Mika Oka2 months ago

    They suck out the light of everyone around them

  • Gigi Gibson2 months ago

    Looks like we’re soul-sisters… I wrote on the same subject for the same challenge. Welcome! 🫶🏻

  • Oooo, this was so poignantly beautiful! Loved your Acrostic!

  • OneWithPen2 months ago

    I enjoyed the intensity of your writing. Both the imagery and the weight within your descriptions, and I look forward to read your next writings.

  • Esala Gunathilake2 months ago

    Good one.

  • Grz Colm2 months ago

    Hey E.K. “The gravity!” - That’s a good description for the feelings encountered. 😊👏

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