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My Bedroom

I want to sleep, but...

By Sone KramerPublished 8 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in the Snafu Senryu Challenge

I want to sleep, but

there are strangers in my bed; I

live on my friend’s couch.

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(drawing by my friend, Tong, of his couch)

childrens poetry

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Sone Kramer

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Comments (15)

  • Raymond G. Taylor8 months ago

    Great senryu and love the illustration. Congrats on your win!

  • Grz Colm8 months ago

    😁 Hey, good one! Congrats on your runner up prize! 😊👏

  • Dana Crandell8 months ago

    Not the best way to make new friends - or maybe... LOL congratulations!

  • Babs Iverson8 months ago

    Congratulations!

  • Madi Haywood8 months ago

    Love this Senryu!

  • Kristen Balyeat8 months ago

    Haha! Yeah, that's awkward. lol! Love the image on this one!

  • E.K. Daniels8 months ago

    Relatable.

  • Melissa Ingoldsby8 months ago

    💓

  • Rachel Deeming8 months ago

    Some people are so inconsiderate especially when there's floor that's perfectly good to sit on.

  • Margaret Brennan8 months ago

    I always found it difficult to sleep in anyone's house. Still do. I'm too aware that, while walls really don't talk, sometimes, they do, and I just might hear every word.

  • Joe Patterson8 months ago

    Gotta love company.

  • Jennifer David8 months ago

    Relateable and rough. yikes! love the image

  • Dylan 8 months ago

    I love it! 😂 Great Senryu!

  • Oh nooooo! That's definitely awkward. And inconvenient.

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