Morning Flight
Summer Searching
A bee in the sticky stillness of the morning
Circling my coffee and my head
Bright colors draw him to paper flowers and the false hope of something sweet
Doesn’t he know that real life exists beyond the screen that encases this little world?
Here it’s just paper and imagination and coffee that’s grown cold.
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Archery Owl
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Most people talk about things that bother them as a way to vent their emotions, another way is through writing. As I sit writing in my car, I ponder how much writing, in itself, has helped me become the person I am today. I have endless amounts of pages filled with poems, stories, and sometimes random blurbs. Writing is a window into your soul. The simple action of writing has benefited me; by helping me to achieve a better memory, helping me to learn and grow intellectually, and helping me to communicate my emotions.
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Awesome work! Love this read. Keep up he good work. When you get a chance please check out my work let me know your thoughts.
Congrats on your top story.
Oo I loved this! You've created such a vivid story. Congrats on the Top Story!
Gorgeous!!!!! Bravo. Love that last bit 👌💯💝👌👏🥰
Oh wow 😮 this has me thinking about the deeper layers of symbolism here. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece!
Interesting poem !
The imagination is a wonderful thing and the bee is telling you to "use" it which I'm glad you did.
Maybe, a bee give inspiration why it comes to you :)