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Men like us
trudge in mud under Russian fire
while callow others load the missiles.
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Men like us,
those poor we hate
kneeling when the muezzin calls
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On both sides of any rifle
there always were men like us.
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They were: builders and rapists and crafters and papists
they were: porters and beggars and cashiers and farmers
they raised walls at the border to prevent themselves crossing over
they voted for those who promised them safety
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And I can't put into words how tired I am, brother,
of those fucking men like us.
About the Creator
M.
Half-time writer, all time joker. M. Maponi specializes in speculative fiction, and speculates on the best way to get his shit together.
Author of "Reality and Contagion" and "Consultancy Blues"
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About Writing
Most people talk about things that bother them as a way to vent their emotions, another way is through writing. As I sit writing in my car, I ponder how much writing, in itself, has helped me become the person I am today. I have endless amounts of pages filled with poems, stories, and sometimes random blurbs. Writing is a window into your soul. The simple action of writing has benefited me; by helping me to achieve a better memory, helping me to learn and grow intellectually, and helping me to communicate my emotions.
By Sarah Wilcox2 days ago in Journal
Comments (18)
A concentrated poetic message that is entirely effective! I'm glad that I saw you featured as "Creators We're Loving" so I could catch this top story that I missed. Excellence!
Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Raw poem and so true. Well done
Amazing congratulations, can you read mine also?
This is amazing!! And captures so much of the unfortunate reality of the majority of men that join the military
This is brilliant, thought provoking and sincere. Congratulations M.!
Oh and congratulations for top story! Well deserved!
So raw and tiring to the bone! I feel your pain through the lines.
Congratulations!! Yes, you have said it all here. And we are all weary. 😔
Honest and raw. Congrats on top story!
This is honest and powerful. Well done!
Well said, you nailed it. Congratulations!
Oof! Straight to the heart with this one... I've been working on healing my relationship with the masculine and I have to say, this little piece is working wonders on that process. Thank you!
M, me too. Enough said.
Very raw and painful prose, great job
Congratulations on Top Story!
Your words are More insightful then it appears on paper (or on the screen) This hit home for any one forced to do the bidding of others we once trusted, or at the very least hoped would be better than the others. Huge congratulations
damn, hard hitting. congrats on the top story.