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steamy bowl of soup
the server forgot my spoon
in my hands i slurp
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Comments (12)
Short and sweet!
lol, Nice one, Rock! Thought I was subscribed...am now!
Superb!!! Love your Haiku!!!💕❤️❤️
Haha. Too hungry to wait.
Hahahahahahahhaa this was so funnyyyyyy! Loved your Haiku!
This is a hilarious image. =D I love all the alliteration too.
lol this gave me a chuckle, great challenge entry
Fantastic haiku!
Been there! Perfect words in this Haiku to bring me right back to that moment.
Perfectly described and what is happening in real time in the Pho restaurants atriums here, I love slurping Miso!
So few words yet I was immediately in the scene :) Now I want some soup! It’s rainy and cool here today.
I really loved this. Gave me both a very vivid image and a chuckle.