HEY! how u doin
for better I wish, I hope you doin
you said you called
and some other messages too
yet they never reached
wonder who you send it to?
the laughs, the giggles
on those stairs it whistles
skipping classes, sipping gossips
and a few broken test tube glasses
the backside benches and us two wenches
bet you are happier in the new town
for i guess more of me were found
maybe the lights fazed you a lot
for when i reached you never called
but whenever you are done
and the influence on you is none
do reach me out, i have a lot to say
''how's life? how's college?
are you still a fan of Barbara palvin?''
till then i'll keep this letter
waiting for things between to get better
beats me i wrote, letter to a friend
just for a letter to be never send.
Writer's note: firstly I apologize, if anybody reads this and it brings back memories of disowned friendships. I am not so good at poetry, so this is my first time submitting a piece, do tell me about your views and feedback in the comment section ( i would love to read some advice and sincerely learn from them).
Here is another song recommendation to make your day better: ''I'm so tired'' by Lauv ( his name is lauv, he spreads love). Have a great day!
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Missclicked
Hey fella! welcome to my blog or you could say a little window into my thoughts. Here I will be writing about various topics like, life experiences, short fictions, poems and sometimes a little insights to my life. I hope we all get along!
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Dear Ms. Click - I'm told we have a mutual admirer in Doc Sherwood - Wondered where he wandered off to - - Always my pleasure - Jay
I found another Cebellen. I love your unique style and open statements that utters another sentiment or thought. This is really great.
This was great. I love the honesty, the hope and you beautifully described the heartache that comes from friends who break things off, often without rhyme or reason to why they have done it.
Your poem was awesomeeee! It did bring back some memories but nothing too unpleasant. Loved your poem!
Marvelous🖤🖤 makes emotional.. It ends so fast... Literally I was hoping for more lines and don't wanna comeback from the past...
This feels so mischievous to read it. Like you want to continue, but simultaneously, want to be away from those memories. 😶.. But you have really done a great job. ❤❤