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Run to the rhythm of the wind in the night
Let it blow you through the maze of mist under the stars till the kiss of dawn’s fog dusts the sky
As the moon awaits the dark again, to pours its deep love into to the sea, the sun sweetly sings
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Jennifer David
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Comments (2)
Hat's off to all poets. It's a gift to pour out so much meaning with so few words.
Beautiful! Short, but packed with such incredible depth. They say that a picture is worth a thousand words. So is your short, sweet poem! You have such talent. I especially love your choice of descriptive verbs, such as "blows you through the maze", "dusts the sky" and "pours its deep love". Well done!