Invaluable
Paintings by the universe
Easing up the mountain on a spring day.
Coming closer to the clouds for a better view with a
lens beyond pure, and deeply understanding its
invaluableness that questions revolving evolution arises.
Pausing to admire the sky's artwork, while anticipating
serenity created by the shadows.
Experiencing an everlasting peace throughout.
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Most people talk about things that bother them as a way to vent their emotions, another way is through writing. As I sit writing in my car, I ponder how much writing, in itself, has helped me become the person I am today. I have endless amounts of pages filled with poems, stories, and sometimes random blurbs. Writing is a window into your soul. The simple action of writing has benefited me; by helping me to achieve a better memory, helping me to learn and grow intellectually, and helping me to communicate my emotions.
By Sarah Wilcox2 days ago in Journal
Comments (21)
I loved this RP! It had me wanting to go for a walk or a hike and I don't even enjoy that sort of thing! Nicely done and congrats on Top Story!!
And that...is one of the myriad of ways that serenity gets done. Peace vibes!
I love the serene feel of this one, RP! Congratulations!
I love the “lens beyond pure” because that really painted the picture for me. So right, when you’re in nature and at great heights like that, it’s a different experience. I think you captured it so well!
Nice job, simple and relatable. Congratulations!
I think I'll get into poetry as well then
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Nicely done acrostic! Congrats on TS.🎉👏👏
Brilliant and motivational!!! Loved your nature acrostic poem!!!💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story too!°
Nicely done RP!
Lovely...
Nicely done. Congratulations on top story!
Congrats on Top Story🥳🥳
Congrats on Top Story!
Your nature poems are always outstanding. This one is no exception! 'the sky's artwork' Everchanging. Always worth the look. Congrats on a well-deserved TS. 😍
Really solid work! Congratulations on the top story!
This felt so peaceful and exhilarating :) Loved it!
Ah, is nature not wonderful. I love the outdoors, nothing like a brisk walk to enhance the senses and renew your spirit. Breathe in fresh air. Lovely.
Amazing poem! I loved it!😊
Oh wow, stunningly gorgeous! Loved your Acrostic!
This is beautiful, and I love the subtitle. Well done.