Interiors
Elephants fill the rooms in this house.
Elephants fill the rooms in this house:
try and get around them.
Tiptoe, tiptoe, squeeze; not quiet-as-a-mouse, because rodents
Provoke. Act normal.
Elephants fill the rooms in this house.
The list of things we cannot say grows longer every year.
But memorise it quietly, please.
Can you?
Elephants fill the rooms in this house.
I sometimes wonder if that's why they're endangered in Africa.
Your insistence on keeping a one-species zoo
Is cruel.
Elephants fill the rooms in this house.
I think we should consider a re-design (without them).
They don't fit, and I am sick of
Shovelling out manure.
Elephants fill the rooms in this house.
The neighbours are starting to talk
And isn't that your worst nightmare -
what they might say?
Elephants fill the rooms in this house.
But I don't think I'll keep up the family tradition
In mine. My home will be
A trampling-free zone.
Thank you for reading my poem - I'd really appreciate a heart if you liked it. Here are some others:
I meditate on the squeeze of your embrace (a Villanelle)
Working All Summer (a Solitary Bee Sonnet)
Know Your Solitary Bees (A Guide in Haiku)
Grey (on not being like them - like this)
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Omg that was so relatable. There are so many elephants in all the rooms of my house, lol!