In Eclipse
Entering Into My First And Beautiful Challenge
Eclipses come, a sight to see,
Covering sun or moon, so free.
Light fades, shadows dance in glee,
Illuminating the sky's mystery.
Passing moments of celestial spree,
Shaping wonders for all to agree.
Enjoy the show, with wonder decree.
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M.B Hesperia
_I loose words when I tell , so I write. _
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This was absolutely wonderful! Very beautifully written!
You wrote in an excellent way...expressive
Beautiful! 💕🙏
This should be top story.
Its a first challenge for me on Vocal. Express your feelings how you feel for eclipse?? Is it a mystery , a horror , or an adventure for you?