i will see you in the sky
i will see you in the sea
i will hear you in the wind
i will hear you in the rain
i will feel you in the heat
i will feel you in the cold
i will hold you in the snow
i will hold you in the sand
i will find find you time and time
but will you know me?
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Vadim Kagan
I believe that each day is a blessing, every story is amazing and all poems should rhyme!
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This is superb! Slightly reminiscent of Gibran's flow.
They're everywhere, aren't they. Beautiful poem. Hope you're doing well. You've been missing for quite some time.
Oh to only be known nice writing Vadim 😊
That last line brings it l together perfectly. Well done.