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I Can Put My Own Shoes On - Or Not

A Breakup Nonet

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
I Can Put My Own Shoes On - Or Not
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Made me believe in Cinderella

Always such a charming fella

Flipped a switch, put me through hell

Made me swear not to tell

But I’m all grown up

Don’t like those shoes

I choose to

Go bare

Foot

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Ameer Bibiabout a month ago

    an amazing entry in the Challenge superbly crafted

  • Paul Stewartabout a month ago

    I love this...it's so honest...so cutting. Slight editorial note thing that you can totally ignore. The syllable count is slightly off cos "I'd rather" is 4. the syllablecounter.net site is a great checker. Anyway, I feel bad saying but would feel worse if I didn't!

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    I knew you were going to have something great for this challenge! I've said it before, but you have an amazing gift for turning desperation into inspiration! Outstanding poem, Kelli!

  • Birch Talesabout a month ago

    I like “barefoot” as a metaphor. No support, but free

  • Mariann Carrollabout a month ago

    We definitely don’t need Prince Charming to put our slippers on .We can live without such lying charm.

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