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How to Fall in Love at First Sight

Beginner's guide

By Teresa RentonPublished 2 years ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
How to Fall in Love at First Sight
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Never prepare for serendipity.

Treat it like a steamy dream

you didn’t see coming;

or the disappearance

of your watch, at the magicians

snap of his wand.

But first fix the fissures

in your crumbling heart.

Wear a helmet, earplugs, and dark glasses;

better still, stay home and lock the doors.

Or catch a bus, read your texts:

Drinks? 7.30?

*

Arrive at work, arrive late, call in sick.

Delete those photos.

We’ve moved on now.

Note to self: What I’m grateful for today is

being single.

Walk through a crowd and notice yourself

not noticing that you’re being noticed.

*

Be silly, try on tiaras, be serious,

sign a petition.

Do all the normal things that someone

not looking for love would do.

Watch a sit-com for company

and never prepare for serendipity.

Or

You could plan, plot a journey

from A to B.

Attach your wings to get there quick.

Wear red lipstick, Chanel No5.

Decide the venue, what to wear?

Buy candles, black lace;

No. Nude lace. Ivory,

then run the duster

over the tube of lube and

make your list,

prepare for serendipity.

*

Next, pull on joggers, old sweater,

ditch the make-up & hair routine. Preparations

must be made. Quick.

Leave the dirty dishes, slam the door,

head towards the mall for supplies.

On the way succumb to the call of coffee;

for energy you tell yourself, but quick quick quick.

*

Ping goes the door as you open it,

card at the ready to pay. Oops!

You knock into a hand that holds a steamy latte;

you feel its hot milky wetness spread

like a map over your sweater.

Everyone sees. You notice them notice you

as you stand there, like the subject

against a bokeh blur

until you too begin

to

fade.

You

only just

hear a

voice

that you want

to hear again and again,

'Are you OK, can I help?'

You look up,

you should have prepared for serendipity.

* * *

inspirational

About the Creator

Teresa Renton

Inhaling life, exhaling stories, poetry, prose, flash or fusions. An imperfect perfectionist who writes and recycles words. I write because I love how it feels to make ink patterns & form words, like pictures, on a page.

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Comments (6)

  • The Invisible Writer7 months ago

    You should have prepared for serendipity what a fantastic way to end a fantastic poem

  • "Serendipity" is one of my favorite holiday movies. You should always be prepared for the person reaching for the same pair of gloves as you.

  • Test8 months ago

    Beautifully written. So many wonderful lines but I loved the image of the coffee spilling ito a map on her sweater. And the last line made me smile. No matter how hard we try ... there is always a curve ball.

  • Novel Allen8 months ago

    Well, it appears everyone wants their choice to be Poppy's choice. Thius was a great entry, hoping Mckenzie gets her wish. But you got some serious competition, I juat read Paul's.

  • Mackenzie Davis8 months ago

    Damn, Teresa, if this doesn't win Poppy's challenge, I will be so upset! Incredible to see it come full circle, and the journey to get there is so enjoyable, so interesting, and full of little moments that I just LOVE. This bit: "You knock into a hand that holds a steamy latte; you feel its hot milky wetness spread like a map over your sweater. Everyone sees. You notice them notice you as you stand there, like the subject against a bokeh blur until you too begin to fade." ---"Like a map" is my favorite part of this. There's so much said there, the fact that it's a map and not something else that would catch someone's eye, but then it also implies that there's a journey that's just beginning with that coffee being spilled. The shoulder too, something to touch and examine...Wow. I could not stop thinking about "Serendipity" the movie, which is one of my favorites. You did such a great job on this poem, I am literally missing it as I'm writing this, lol.

  • Poppy 8 months ago

    Ahhh I absolutely love this. I don't even know where to start. I love how it tells a story through instructions. The super impactful 'Or' midway through was used so masterfully. 'notice yourself not noticing that you’re being noticed' was a wonderful line and I love how you wove in its opposite later. The way the lines shorten to just one or two words near the end is sooo effective, I can't even explain the extent of it. Like I felt like time was speeding up and slowing down all at once just reading that. And the ending, oh my, it was marvelous. I can't even explain how good it was. I really, really enjoyed this Teresa!

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