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how the mountain disappears from the ski lift

a haiku

By sleepy draftsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
how the mountain disappears from the ski lift
Photo by Patrick T'Kindt on Unsplash

blue hands, burning stars,

one stolen kiss in the sky

paired with fervent eyes.

love poemsnature poetry

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sleepy drafts

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Comments (7)

  • Poppy 10 months ago

    Another incredible haiku!

  • Sonia Heidi Unruhabout a year ago

    I am in awe of your storytelling! And the title launches the poem so unexpectedly yet perfectly.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 years ago

    Nicely done! "one stolen kiss in the sky" Powerful and moving!

  • Very descriptive work!

  • Beautifully graphic, you've painted a whole evening in 16 syllables. Thank you for sharing.

  • Michele Jones2 years ago

    Sounds like a good evening.

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    A beautiful, romantic, stolen moment captured in words. Loved it!

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