Grief
What ails me
By Donna Fox (HKB)Published about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
Photo by Annie Spratt on Unsplash
Breathe in, breathe out
Breathe in, breathe out.
Ba-bum, ba-bum
My heart beats on.
Exhausted.
Another sleepless night,
Laying here in mourning,
Waiting for morning.
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Comments (3)
This was wayyyy too relatable! Loved your poem!
I'm a little confused. I though poems had to be 100 words or more. Surprised they published it. Good for you. Express yourself.
I feel this!