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Futility of Obstinance

One Line Poem Challenge Inspired by RHC!

By Paul StewartPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Futility of Obstinance
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To fail and fail to learn is vanity, like chasing windblown sand.

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Author's Notes: Saw Kendall Defoe's What To Say and Rick's Never Seen Again, so though I'd give it ago. You can take a look at their pieces below:

Inspired by Rick Henry Christopher and C. Rommial Butler, here are the rules:

  1. Must be 9 to 12 words
  2. The third word and last word must rhyme
  3. The poem must have a meaning to it
  4. Give it a title that is relevant to the meaning of the poem

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Paul Stewart

Scottish-Italian poet/writer from Glasgow.

Overflowing in English language torture and word abuse.

"Every man has a sane spot somewhere" R.L Stevenson

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Comments (8)

  • Kristen Balyeat6 months ago

    oh this is perfect.

  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    Nicely done, Sir!

  • Hannah Moore6 months ago

    Very good. And seems such a minor key to rhyme off, I kind of like it, it's almost rebellious.

  • Chasing windblown sand. That blew my mind!!! Loved your one line poem! 🍩🥐

  • Shirley Belk6 months ago

    stubborn pride is so foolish....love your creative mind...very good one!!

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    Cool man! Not seen this challenge as yet!..

  • Beautifully said.

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