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From Hell to Heaven

My Walk in the Park

By Colleen Millsteed Published 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

I drove the express on the highway to hell last week

And can promise I did not enjoy that ride,

I found the going was extremely rough

And more than once I lost my stride.

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I had no intention of staying for long

As I had my strength on my side,

But the days without sleep, the pain at no end

Was definitely enough to see me hide.

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This week I took to the highway again

Though I decided to skip the express,

A more leisurely drive, time on my side

A ride taken without duress.

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At the end of the road was a little slice of heaven

I'd come to the end of the land,

Clear skies, blue water, the salt air smell

And my bare feet in white sand.

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Although I wasn't given the choice

Of taking that trip in the dark,

Without that nightmarish journey last week

I wouldn't have found my walk in the park!!!

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Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    I loved this!

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