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Floating With Stars

Universal Love

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published about a month ago 1 min read
Floating With Stars
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I Was Chained To The Somber Sickle Of Love,

But I Began To Languish In Your Arms…

My Walls Tumbled Over, Brick By Brick

Falteringly Into The Floods Of Eager Desires…

I Aimed To Resist, As Your Pride,

Lambasted The Perimeter Of My Defenses,

And Together We Floated With The Stars…

Celestial Love Splashed Upon My Skin,

And I Surrendered To The Randomness

Of Momentary Intimacy…

Engrossed By Rapture Touching My Heart,

I Sang To The Universe

As I Floated With The stars…

🌟🌟🌟🌟

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Comments (15)

  • Antoinette L Brey27 days ago

    I loved this

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    Eloquent and sensual, as always, Lonzo! Well done!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    This is beautiful. Well done.

  • Sid Aaron Hirjiabout a month ago

    You spoke your bars about the stars. With love so strong that you know where you belong.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Oh wow, this was so magical! Loved your poem!

  • Dylan about a month ago

    Fantastic poem!

  • Grz Colmabout a month ago

    ☺️👏👍

  • Sasi Kalaabout a month ago

    Lovely poem!🙂

  • Nagoh Creative (Greg)about a month ago

    Love you used the Orion Nebula. I have a beauty image I captured of this one myself.

  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    Love at yet another level.

  • Heather Hublerabout a month ago

    Quite lovely ☺️

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Great! It is a beautiful perspective about stars!

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a month ago

    🤩🤩🤩 Beautiful! Great to see one of your poems float in from the stars!

  • Margaret Brennanabout a month ago

    Oh, how I love this. Reminds me of the love shared between my sons and their wives. So beautiful.

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a month ago

    Gorgeous romantic poetry my friend! Hope you are doing well

HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Written by HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

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