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I cautioned when signing those cheques
Not to cash them until Wednesday next
Un-heeded, my warning
They bounced Monday morning
and now I've been charged NSF
While conscious of my obligation:
provide the agreed compensation
You own your own home
Must be nice not to roam
Combing streets seeking safe habitation
I'm sure you've got your troubles, too
Of those who have none there are few
But a man who buys land
hawking old rope can anticipate
that the weight of their gains will accrue
Though you may have worked hard to obtain
Hollow dreams sold to you to maintain
Mass corrupt classist systems
You too are a victim
Deserving both pity and blame
For a hard day's work once was fulfilling
And paired with luck could mean a killing
That bed of fake roses
Thrust under our noses
Just shows us, however, how grossly unwilling
Are blind men who sit in high towers
To nurture the blooming of flowers
Replacing our wages
With snake oil and cages
Assuages ill-gains and false powers
So yes, I am late on my rent
And for that I sincerely repent
But when you punish me
For your failed empathy
You misdirect your malcontent
As painstaking as it may be, you see,
to wait for the date upon which we agreed
to collect your exorbitant fee
You're tapping a sap-barren tree.
My paycheque's the same
No matter who you blame
Go complain to the powers that be
P.S.
We still don't have hot water
About the Creator
J
I will not say: do not weep; for not all tears are an evil
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Comments (4)
This is brilliant J! Love the commentary on the inequality of power and wealth, the struggles of renting, and the uncaring attitudes of those in charge. Fantastic takedown. "You're tapping a sap-barren tree."
That was some fantastic writing! I enjoyed it immensely.
I didn't know these were sets of Limericks until I saw your tag at the end of the poem. So I reread your poem with the correct intonations! Loved it so much!
Still gotta pay them bills, no one cares why. I totally love you F,,k the system rant. It seems to be going around a lot.