The invisible eyes, stared at her
When she directly stared at its soul
Room felt much larger
Volume on top
Same song on loop
Maybe has a backstory
The character; herself
Portraying the anxious episodes
Aesthetically
.
Her soothing voice got me to chuckle
Unknowingly blush left out
The eyes from outside
Perhaps smiled
.
I gaze at the ceiling in awe thinking how a 3 minute song can depict a situation we go through every day. And to consummate that situation you have an imaginary friend to listen it with and be at ease forever and crave to freeze time.
About the Creator
Riju Chaulagai
I am in my early 20s and I have been writing poems for a couple of years now.
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Comments (1)
Very very excellent work. Beginning with the image of invisible eyes staring at her, down through the song on same old loop, such good writing, and then nice way of finishing with a block of prose.