Poets logo

Eye Damage

Eclipse

By Jeremy WhitePublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Eye Damage
Photo by Ian Parker on Unsplash

Eye damage.

Cause you didn’t listen.

Listen next time.

I will listen next time.

Purpose found in darkness.

See what happens.

Everything is dark.

For Fun

About the Creator

Jeremy White

I am from a small town. I have grown up surrounded by woods. I love to Write. I started out with poems. I did not start writing stories until I joined vocal. Writing stories is really fun. I have a Bachelors in Psychology.

Enjoyed the story?
Support the Creator.

Subscribe for free to receive all their stories in your feed. You could also pledge your support or give them a one-off tip, letting them know you appreciate their work.

Subscribe For FreePledge Your Support

Reader insights

Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

Add your insights

Comments (5)

  • Mike Singleton - Mikeydred3 months ago

    Excellent take on the challenge

  • Denise E Lindquist3 months ago

    Thank you for this! So many people watching and I hope it wasn't a thing! I remember long ago watching with my siblings and when I had our dad's welding helmet on I looked down and they had their eyes squeezed tight!❤️

  • Andrea Corwin 3 months ago

    Yep, perfect for those who LOOKED when they shouldn't have. Fun!

  • Babs Iverson3 months ago

    Fabulous and fabulous message!!! Love it!!!

  • Joe Patterson3 months ago

    Great warning.

JWWritten by Jeremy White

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2024 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.