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I have enough weight
with my baggage to carry.
Lift your own suitcase.
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Lindsay Sfara
I'm just a daydreaming nerd writing poetry and fiction about mental health.
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"Not all those who wander are lost" - J.R.R. Tolkien
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Comments (4)
Some people have so much baggage that they don't have baggage their baggage has them. It's like they're being thrown around in a tumbleweed of their own baggage, especially when it comes to holding impossible standards for their partner, friends, family, etc.
I'm with Shirley on this one. First of all, this is a wonderful and impactful Haiku, Lindsay. But your final line made me laugh out loud. Just sayin'.
I don't know why this made me laugh, but it did!
Oh my goodness, yes!!!!