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Darkness

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By Eiman AsifPublished 5 months ago 1 min read

Darkness, I really like you..

I can't sleep in the light I need you..

But the deadly secrets that you hide...

I'm not sure, but within you, I see no guide..

Darkness! I am really Like you...

All dark and alone, just one like you..

But my dear friend, I don't like it..

All the loneliness, pressure, depression there's a lot in it..

Darkness! You promised me you'll always be there..

and now it seems like I'll forever stay here..

But who am I? Why do I still feel sad when I have you..?

Tell me, my true friend! Should I leave you..?

Darkness! you are my heartbeat..

But tell me why when people meet you and me together, They complain if my heart was made of concrete..?

Hey Dark! All I see is only you..?

No light is found even when the sun shines above you..

Tell me! I really wanna stay with you..

Cause now It feels as if a true friend is you..

Darkness..... I ..... really......like......you......now.......

Darkness can't bear more I tried but let's meet again now...

................

Writer: Eiman Asif

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Comments (3)

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran5 months ago

    Oooo, I love my darkness too! Your poem was so poignant!

  • Test5 months ago

    Awww, what a beautiful tribute to the moon! Loved it!

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