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Dancing . . . Thoughts

A poem of thoughts in increments

By Brenda MahlerPublished 26 days ago 1 min read
Dancing . . . Thoughts
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Her thoughts, “His eyes . . . not blinking, almost staring.”

He thinks, “She’s . . . younger.”

“Should I return . . . glances.”

“ . . . attractive smile.”

“ . . .tight grasp . . .eyes piercing . . .”

“Light on her feet . . . radiant.”

“It’s ending.”

“ . . . ending.”

“ . . . quiet. . . eyes speak. . . “

“Friendly smile.”

“My table . . . his . . . ?”

“Hers? . . . mine?”

“A lady doesn’t . . . ”

“She’s a lady.”

“ . . . glances. . .”

“Inviting smile . . . maybe . . .”

“He’s looking . . . away.”

“Tense . . . nervous.”

“Thanks.”

“Thank You.”

“Those eyes . . .”

“That smile . . .”

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran26 days ago

    Awww, this was so sweet! Loved your poem!

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