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Credo for the Faithless

See me, Survivor

By Harbor BenassaPublished about a month ago Updated about a month ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
Credo for the Faithless
Photo by Possessed Photography on Unsplash

Autumn rocks the world to sleep in perfect noontime slumber,

Nodding off, perchance to dream in color, and believe He's there.

Nocturnes press against my lips, but all these harvests pass, and here

Is where my body lies, a silenced pile of leaves- the phantom

Visits me, or feigns his presence, and before the glass, I freeze.

Embers still illuminate the bone dry channels carved beneath,

Remembrances of chill and silver moonlit edge

Swirl in a blinding dance a hidden undertone of rage bespeaks.

Abandoned wounds unstitch, pouring forth a faithless fire,

Reigniting life- and I, the chosen one, reprise the opera:

You may live forever, but at least I sing again.

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Harbor Benassa

I carry a piece of the things that I love wherever I go. I love short fiction, chocolate ganache, forensic science, and, aptly, the water.

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  • ROCK about a month ago

    Congratulations on Top Story Harbor!

  • Dawnxisoul393artabout a month ago

    The imagery of nodding off, dreaming in color, and believing in a divine presence evokes a sense of wonder and enchantment, amazing poem, love your works, subscribed.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Andrea Corwin about a month ago

    Top Story Congrats!🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • Alexandra Ntuiabout a month ago

    I love your poem Keep it up

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    Congrats on your top story.

  • Great take on the challenge and love the image

  • Dana Crandellabout a month ago

    This was an amazing entry, Harbor! Congratulations on the Top Story, and good luck!

  • Matthew Frommabout a month ago

    great entry, good luck!

  • Cathy holmesabout a month ago

    Wow. Beautifully written. Congrats on the TS.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a month ago

    Such richness of phrasing! Nicely done!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    I love "Abandoned wounds unstitch", great line

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    "Embers still illuminate the bone dry channels carved beneath, Remembrances of chill and silver moonlit edge" I especially loved those lines! Brilliant take on the challenge!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a month ago

    A nice poetry from you.

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