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Slows time to a scrawl
Drawing closer by degrees
Hour hand is trembling
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Matthew Daniels
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Comments (2)
Matthew, I love the personification of time in that final line! This was short a sweet but really captured the feeling I have when I'm cold, the time slowing down and the wish for myself to hurry up and warm up! Nice work!
Love the last line, the hour hand slow and trembling in the cold.