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Burnt Toast and Bitter Coffee

Election Promises

By Cathy holmesPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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Dripping black sludge in our community cups while

Insisting we drink for the greater good of all.

Sliding your greasy hands into our pockets

To pay for your eggs benny and avocado toast, while

Restricting our options at the table until all that’s left is

A charred molehill of garbage that even a vulture wouldn’t eat.

Can’t you see the irony, vultures?

Tell us your lies. Make your assurances. Promise us the finest buffet.

I know it is just a distraction, a ruse intent on brainwashing the masses.

Oh, I see right through you. I’ve tasted your buffet and I know it’s

Nothing but burnt toast and bitter coffee for all.

social commentaryslam poetry

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Cathy holmes

Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.

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Comments (26)

  • Holly Pheniabout a year ago

    This is great!!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Mic fucking drop. I wish these thoughts and words felt by so many ever seemed to penetrate the thick bubble these assholes have insulated themselves with. It's soul tiring. Amazing expressed.

  • Colleen Millsteed about a year ago

    On point as always my friend. 💕

  • Roy Stevensabout a year ago

    Far too true! Well spoken Cathy!

  • Naomi Goldabout a year ago

    You expressed a universal truth, because anywhere there’s an election, people must vote for the lesser of two evils and hope they deliver on a small fraction of their promises. The title, imagery, and symbolism of what they offer was so clever! Brilliant slam poetry. 👏🏼

  • Phil Flanneryabout a year ago

    That was brilliant. You stick it to the man Cathy.

  • ISTG, this happens everywhere. There isn't one politician that ain't corrupt. Everything has an ulterior motive. I'm just so sick and tired of this! I'm so glad you voiced this out!

  • Mark Gagnonabout a year ago

    Sounds like Canada has the same issues as the US

  • Julia Schulzabout a year ago

    Great job!

  • Lilly Cooperabout a year ago

    A good read! Well done :)

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Well done, my friend!!!💖💖💕

  • Leslie Writesabout a year ago

    They need to brainwash us so we don't riot and burn it all down! Great poem!

  • Where politics & unfettered capitalism meet, there is always going to be a huckster determined to scam for all their worth.

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    I've never heard it called "eggs benny" before.. I love that 🤗 This was such a fun read, but I won't be going to that place anytime soon 😅

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Slam! This is marvelous. I love eggs Benny but haven’t had in awhile, ha!

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Where is this buffet, I will definitely avoid it like a plague

  • Real Poeticabout a year ago

    Excellent! 👏🏼👏🏼👏🏼

  • Luke Fosterabout a year ago

    Brilliant one, great job.

  • That's Right Cathy❗❤️📝💯😉🎯

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    Three cheers on this one! Outstanding!

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    Very well done! But I like burnt toast, and I'm also the person who likes to flame my marshmallows over a campfire ...

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    Spot on Cathy. It’s cuts like a knife through the BS. Well done 😎

  • Excellent poem!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Great take on the challenge Cathy! Good luck 😁

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