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My world is falling apart,
Starting with a broken heart
You say, "At least we tried"
But after the call, I just cried
I just want to feel okay
But I doubt that will happen in any way
I felt safe when I was with you
But as of right now, all I am is blue
* * *
Sorry it isn't good. I just had my heart shattered into a million pieces and needed to vent.
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Rene Peters
I write what I know, usually in the form of poetry. I tend to lean towards mental health, epilepsy, and loss/grieving.
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Comments (5)
It's VERY good, but I am so sorry
What happen ? I thought all was going well 😢Stay strong 💪🏼 You got this 💗Sending good vibes
Hugs from me to you I understand this all too well, good to vent it's a good thing for your health to do
It is a great poem. I am so sorry for your shattered heart. Life is so hard sometimes. 🫶💋🤗🤗
This is exactly how I feel right now. I'm so sorry you feel this way as well 🥺 Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️