I was stuck.
I could’ve moved,
but I was worried I’d shatter.
I should’ve instructed
my thoughts to scatter.
Instead, I was crushed
by your words.
I was haunted by a man
who didn’t even put me third.
Your inconsistencies
left me suspiciously
confused.
I knew I was being used.
And I stayed.
I knew I had to go,
but still I prayed for things
to go back to the way they were.
You weren’t who you portrayed,
yet I continued to wait for your
facade to return.
I soon learned it
was all an act.
Your heart was never
in tact to love another.
It took sometime to uncover
what you really are…
A monster.
That crept underneath
my bed to mess with my head.
I hate that I allowed
you so close to me.
Your access is denied.
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Author’s note: I wrote this in response to RM Stockton’s prompt, “The monster under your bed.” Click here to learn more about his writing club.
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Comments (14)
RP this was so well written and concisely said! It was relatable and emotional!! I love that this is an entry for RM's challenge too! Great work!
This was so incredible! It’s an amazing description of the difficulties of leaving a bad situation… or a situation turned bad. I think many people think “just leave it’s easy” but most times it isn’t. This was so well done!
Oh yes, I know those monsters, met one myself. I keep saying narcissism is alive and well. Guard your heart well, they are masters of the game. Tomorrow, restart tomorrow. Sad, lovely poetry.
Love this and the crept underneath my bed imagery!! Terrific work.
Ugh!!! These situations are haunting! Great entry that pulls at the anger strings.
Well written! ❤️
This was extremely relatable! I'm so sorry you had to experience this as well. Sending you lots of love and hugs 🥺❤️
I'm sorry. I didn't mean to be hiding under bed, but I guess that would demonstrate how lacking in tact I am. Good job, Real.
Such a raw and powerful poem, great job!
Well said!
Your writing inspires me😌
This is such a fantastic poem, filled with raw pain and powerful emotions. RP, you routinely deliver poems with a real punch, and this is no exception. Fantastic entry! I am blown away by the quick response.
This is great. I especially love the ending.
This is beautiful...raw and honest. I say that a lot, I feel, about your work, RP. but, it's so true. I knew where this was going from the outset...but it was exquisite. Such powerful use of well-chosen and sparse words. The line "I was haunted by a man who didn’t even put me third." especially stood out. Great entry!