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Youth memory haunts
seems like only yesterday
the mirror must lie
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Comments (11)
Truth in a well written haiku!
So true!!! Lol! Loved it!!!💖💖💕
Love this!! I remember when I was a young teenager, my mom said something like “I look in the mirror and I don’t FEEL that old…. I still feel like me?” 🙁. Now that I’m past 30 I’m starting to relate to that more and more!
So relatable, lols 😂! Love this, Dana 💕🙂
Ah, this was so relatable! I still feel and act like a child, lol! Loved your Haiku!
Awesome piece 🥰❤️💯👍
Nice 👍 😊
Ou this is great
Forget the mirror. The bathroom scale is the biggest liar! I swear it's broken 😤. Take my ❤️ and subscription and go 😂
Perfect! Yet with age comes wisdom and a classic beauty that we flit and titter away from when young. 🥰
Very insightful. I was feeling this one for sure! Haikus are so short that sometimes it's hard to get into them but you totally mastered it!